Talk:German submarine U-162 (1941)/GA1

Latest comment: 14 years ago by Leonard^Bloom in topic GA Review

GA Review

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A couple points worth mentioning:

SO you want me to go over to SM U-11 and fix up the infobox there or fix up this one?--Coldplay Expért Let's talk 10:31, 18 March 2010 (UTC)Reply
Expand this article's infobox to the same level of depth, if possible. Lәo(βǃʘʘɱ) 01:46, 19 March 2010 (UTC)Reply
  • No picture available?
Sadly, there is no surviving image of U-162. I may be able to get an image of another u-boat from the class that u-162 is in though.--Coldplay Expért Let's talk 10:31, 18 March 2010 (UTC)Reply
I've added in an image of another Type IXC u-boat instead.--Coldplay Expért Let's talk 10:55, 18 March 2010 (UTC)Reply
Okay. Lәo(βǃʘʘɱ) 01:46, 19 March 2010 (UTC)Reply
  • "Almost the entire crew survived and were then taken to POW camps in the United States where they were to remain for the rest of the war,"—reword or reference please. "Almost the entire crew" is vague and sounds like what would be defaulted to when a reference can't be found.
I've reworded it and added a citation.--Coldplay Expért Let's talk 10:43, 18 March 2010 (UTC)Reply
Okay. Lәo(βǃʘʘɱ) 01:46, 19 March 2010 (UTC)Reply
  • Either no citations or all citations in the lede.
All citations. done as well.--Coldplay Expért Let's talk 10:43, 18 March 2010 (UTC)Reply
Okay. Lәo(βǃʘʘɱ) 01:46, 19 March 2010 (UTC)Reply
  • Placing the image of the emblem where it is interferes with the table right below it.
Moved.--Coldplay Expért Let's talk 10:43, 18 March 2010 (UTC)Reply
Okay. Lәo(βǃʘʘɱ) 01:46, 19 March 2010 (UTC)Reply
  • For the further reading section, I'd advise removing the Vol. 2 piece, only because further reading for the general topic would not be volume specific, but it could vary as to what you think the section should be for.
I've removed it.--Coldplay Expért Let's talk 10:47, 18 March 2010 (UTC)Reply
Okay. Lәo(βǃʘʘɱ) 01:46, 19 March 2010 (UTC)Reply

Looks good thus far. Fix/resolve/correct me on those issues, and it's an easy pass.

Reviewer: Lәo(βǃʘʘɱ) 03:49, 18 March 2010 (UTC)Reply

Well I've addressed everything that you mentioned other than number 1 and 2. Let me know what you want be to do about them.--Coldplay Expért Let's talk 10:47, 18 March 2010 (UTC)Reply
Address the current issues and it'll be an easy pass. Lәo(βǃʘʘɱ) 01:46, 19 March 2010 (UTC)Reply
I'm working on it now. (Yes this is still CE, I've gone through a name change)--White Shadows you're breaking up 01:48, 19 March 2010 (UTC)Reply
All done.--White Shadows you're breaking up 01:52, 19 March 2010 (UTC)Reply
Congrats. Lәo(βǃʘʘɱ) 03:36, 19 March 2010 (UTC)Reply