Talk:German European School Manila

Latest comment: 15 years ago by Ghaag in topic Advert?

Advert? edit

  • Sorry, but this article looks a bit like a brochure for the school, rather than an encyclopedic article. Try adding some references from third parties, some pictures, notable alumni, things like that. Also putting the contact information in the article does not help it not look like an advert, instead try adding a link to the schools contact page.

Hope this helps, Anna
AnnaJGrant (talk) 07:59, 27 March 2008 (UTC)Reply

  • I restructured the article to try to make it more informative. I also linked it with other related pages in cluding third parties. Regarding the notable alumni that is another challenge altogether... Hope this helps for now. Ghaag (talk) 08:51, 23 February 2009 (UTC)Reply