Talk:Gathering of Israel
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editI, Tom Irvine (aka Gex999) am the author of http://www.vibrationdata.com/Gathering_of_Jews.htm. I hereby grant free license to Wikipedia to use the material on the above page for: http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Gathering_of_Israel
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- Cool. That's one step. Now please deal with the issue of the article being OR and not referenced otherwise. I think there's also a rule about not writing essays on WP, but obviously, the beauty of wp is finding those sources and having others collaborate on the article. Another thing, besides the OR, is that even though I haven't read the whole piece, it seems that some sections are POV. If it's a work in progress, I'll let you continue, but it needs improvement. The subject is certainly an important phenomenon. --Shuki 07:41, 1 May 2007 (UTC)
"Doctrine & Covenant" references and overall article structure
editIs this article attempting to cover the Gathering of Israel as described Biblically, or historical Zionism? There seems to be a blurring of sources into a single story rather than an examination of differing views of the gathering among Jews and Christians. The Doctrine & Covenant has no relevance in Jewish thought, for example. It seems that instead of a chronology that appears to be Jewish history, separate discussions of the significance of the Gathering of Israel to different theologies would be in order. All of them being blended into a one-viewpoint history of the Jewish people with non-Jewish scripture citations doesn't serve any purpose I can discern.
History of Zionism and History of Israel do a better job of covering that material. The gathering as a precondition for the Second Coming would seem to belong here, too, but in a section about Christian theology. The references to Mormon scripture would belong in either a subsection or its own separate place, rather than in a discussion of the Abrahamic Covenant.
I'm not so bold as to attempt a rewrite about a topic I don't know, but these changes seem necessary for thematic coherence. Tiresias BC (talk) 00:20, 9 May 2008 (UTC)
merge
edit- merge - some subject. Maybe two OR articles can become combined into one better essay on the subject. There has been tremendous work put into both but a)merge b)please improve with references to WP:RS. --Shuki (talk) 20:17, 2 June 2008 (UTC)
- I don't think these articles are good candidates for a merge. The Return to Zion is sound article with a reasonable focus. Ten Lost Tribes and the various articles listed in Template:Aliyah do a decent job of covering the topic; this article doesn't look particularly useful. GRBerry 15:31, 16 June 2008 (UTC)
- I agree with GRBerry. The reason given for the merge was a lack of reliable source. Well, merging to different topic-article isn't going to improve the reliability of the sources. Add more sources to "Gathering of Israel" or re-write a new article of "Gathering of Israel" that does have reliable sources.
Rewrting
editAs I have promised, I have rewritten it, and translated it from the Article in Hebrew Wikipedia.
Other menaings of Kibbutz Galuyot
editKibbutz Galuyot redirects here. But isn't that also the name of a highway junction near Tel Aviv that features prominently in radio traffic jam reports? (As well as the name of a place next to the highway interchange). May be a disambiguation page might be a good idea? --Soylentyellow (talk) 20:11, 9 September 2008 (UTC)
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