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New Lead Section
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JamAKiska (talk) 19:16, 9 October 2009 (UTC) This section expands from previous material by distinguishing a gas from other states of matter and expands upon the various types of gases.
JamAKiska (talk) 22:39, 9 October 2009 (UTC) wikified physical properties.
JamAKiska (talk) 21:26, 11 October 2009 (UTC)Inserted Purplesmoke image into characteristics, and tweaked introduction for readability
JamAKiska (talk) 04:11, 12 October 2009 (UTC) Tweaks on macroscopic for clarity.
JamAKiska (talk) 15:48, 12 October 2009 (UTC)/* Macroscopic */ Expanding this discussion to improve link to historical, math, and the rest of this article.
JamAKiska (talk) 19:51, 12 October 2009 (UTC) Tweaks for clarity.
JamAKiska (talk) 21:05, 12 October 2009 (UTC) /* Pressure */ clarifying passage. My intent is to relocate the last portion into the Kinetic theory section.
JamAKiska (talk) 21:35, 12 October 2009 (UTC)Relocating material where more appropriate. Tweaks to temperature.
JamAKiska (talk) 01:47, 13 October 2009 (UTC) Minor tweaks for clarity on Temperature.
JamAKiska (talk) 01:52, 13 October 2009 (UTC) Looking ahead to the volume section, looks like my definitions do not agree with the current material. Anticipate a rewrite of this section. JamAKiska (talk) 11:40, 13 October 2009 (UTC) Reread after a good nights sleep and this section is correct.
JamAKiska (talk) 03:38, 13 October 2009 (UTC) /* Microscopic */ Expanding section to provide crosslinks to other sections.
JamAKiska (talk) 12:31, 13 October 2009 (UTC) /* Specific Volume / Volume */ tweaked for clarity and introduced compressibility.
JamAKiska (talk) 15:23, 13 October 2009 (UTC) Clarifying macroscopic sections and adding symbology.
JamAKiska (talk) 12:43, 15 October 2009 (UTC) /*Macro*/ Adding imagery and supporting language in the closing paragraph of this section to expand connections.
JamAKiska (talk) 16:48, 15 October 2009 (UTC) Tweaks for clarity.
JamAKiska (talk) 16:57, 15 October 2009 (UTC) /* Intermolecular forces */ Tweaks for clarity regarding compressibility effects.
JamAKiska (talk) 21:47, 15 October 2009 (UTC) /* Simplified models */ Restructuring to ease transition into more challenging material.
JamAKiska (talk) 22:58, 15 October 2009 (UTC) /* Real gas */ Extending coverage from ideal to real gases. Reorganized Historical section to include Avogadro's law.
JamAKiska (talk) 23:03, 15 October 2009 (UTC) /* Real gas */ editing footnote.
JamAKiska (talk) 17:33, 16 October 2009 (UTC) /* Historical Synthesis */ Added background for depth.
JamAKiska (talk) 17:56, 16 October 2009 (UTC) / * Simplified Models */ Tweak citations for standardization.
JamAKiska (talk) 18:08, 16 October 2009 (UTC) /* Law of Volumes */Grammar Tweaks.
JamAKiska (talk) 04:34, 17 October 2009 (UTC) Supplementing article with models and images to illustrate key points.
JamAKiska (talk) 15:17, 17 October 2009 (UTC) /* Macroscopic */ Aligning captions with article.
JamAKiska (talk) 15:32, 17 October 2009 (UTC) /* Intermolecular forces */ Citing sources and aligning text with article.
JamAKiska (talk) 15:50, 17 October 2009 (UTC) /* Simplified models */ Citing sources and aligning text with article.
JamAKiska (talk) 16:40, 17 October 2009 (UTC) /* Real gas */ Realigning text to introduce image.
JamAKiska (talk) 16:45, 17 October 2009 (UTC) /* Simplified models */ Realigning text to introduce image.
JamAKiska (talk) 16:51, 17 October 2009 (UTC) /* Pressure */ Realigning text to introduce image.
JamAKiska (talk) 16:59, 17 October 2009 (UTC) /* Historical Synthesis */ Realigning text to introduce image.
JamAKiska (talk) 17:09, 17 October 2009 (UTC) /* Special Topics */ Citing image sources.
JamAKiska (talk) 13:01, 5 November 2009 (UTC) Prividing links to additional material on Bose-Einstein condensate.
JamAKiska (talk) 13:06, 5 November 2009 (UTC) Wikifying footnote.
JamAKiska (talk) 13:17, 5 November 2009 (UTC) Tweaks for readability.
JamAKiska (talk) 13:26, 5 November 2009 (UTC) Editing for clarity.
JamAKiska (talk) 13:45, 5 November 2009 (UTC) Editing for clarity.
JamAKiska (talk) 22:56, 5 November 2009 (UTC) Completed article introduction.
JamAKiska (talk) 15:21, 7 November 2009 (UTC) Tweaks for readability.
JamAKiska (talk) 14:53, 13 November 2009 (UTC) Revised introduction to establish stronger links to current research and improve readability.
JamAKiska (talk) 22:22, 13 November 2009 (UTC) Readability adjustment.
JamAKiska (talk) 22:47, 13 November 2009 (UTC) Adjusting footnotes.
JamAKiska (talk) 15:06, 14 November 2009 (UTC) Linking to optics.
JamAKiska (talk) 20:59, 16 November 2009 (UTC) /* Turbulence */ Adjusted caption to include optical connection of gases.
JamAKiska (talk) 15:41, 18 November 2009 (UTC) /* See also */ More topics added.
JamAKiska (talk) 17:06, 25 November 2009 (UTC) /* See also */ Adding gas extensions.
JamAKiska (talk) 02:57, 7 December 2009 (UTC) /* Simplified models */ Adding current examples of applications.
JamAKiska (talk) 14:19, 7 December 2009 (UTC) /* Perfect gas */ Tweak for Clarification.
Added clarification that the article, as written, does not consider significant electric or gravitational effect. CUoD (talk) 13:50, 23 December 2009 (UTC)
Linking to current events in aviation. CUoD (talk) 20:13, 23 December 2009 (UTC)
/* Macroscopic */ Adjusting article for removal of carrier landing photo and relocation of other photos to the right. —Preceding unsigned comment added by JamAKiska (talk • contribs) 16:42, 5 January 2010 (UTC)
/* Brownian motion */ Tweaking text to align with de-animated files. CUoD (talk) 17:06, 5 January 2010 (UTC)
/* Real gas */ Realigning text in article to new photo locations. CUoD (talk) 17:12, 5 January 2010 (UTC)
/* Turbulence et al */ Realigning text in article to new photo locations. —Preceding unsigned comment added by JamAKiska (talk • contribs) 17:17, 5 January 2010 (UTC)
/* Temperature */ Introducing movie of balloon under influence of liquid nitrogen. CUoD (talk) 17:31, 5 January 2010 (UTC)
/* Simplified models */ Introducing relocated Wright Flyer photo. CUoD (talk) 17:37, 5 January 2010 (UTC)
Reintroduced all images in article to eliminate spatial references, as not all viewers get same formatting for images on their screens. —Preceding unsigned comment added by JamAKiska (talk • contribs) 15:04, 13 February 2010 (UTC)
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