Talk:Gabrielle Réjane

Latest comment: 4 years ago by Tim riley in topic Informal review

Informal review

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  • Lead and opening section show DoB as 6 June; the idiot box shows the 5th
  • (She was in Allô-Allô? Was she the busty barmaid or the sultry spy?)
  • "unexpected. unrecognisable Réjane" and "frumpish. in the": capital U (for "unrecognisable") and capital I?
  • "friend;[19] His": full stop or lower case "h"
  • "did not extent to the": extend?

That's my lot. Very nice fare to deal with. - SchroCat (talk) 12:43, 22 July 2020 (UTC)Reply

Good! Thank you for those points. Shall deal therewith. Tim riley talk 20:52, 23 July 2020 (UTC)Reply
Every one a bull's eye! All attended to. Many thanks. Tim riley talk 07:02, 26 July 2020 (UTC)Reply