Talk:Functional diversity (organizational)
 | Functional diversity (organizational) was nominated as a Social sciences and society good article, but it did not meet the good article criteria at the time (June 5, 2015, reviewed version). There are suggestions on the review page for improving the article. If you can improve it, please do; it may then be renominated. |
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Reviewer: Jaguar (talk · contribs) 19:03, 5 June 2015 (UTC)
I should have this complete tomorrow JAGUAR 19:03, 5 June 2015 (UTC)
Initial comments edit
- The lead doesn't comply per WP:LEAD. The are no wiki-links in it, the prose appears quite confusing to readers and it does not seem to summarise the article. I would recommend re-writing some parts and splitting the lead into at least two paragraphs, for accessibility
- "Functionally diverse teams “consist of individuals with a variety of educational and training backgrounds working together."" - where did this quote come from? Or who? This needs to be paraphrased
- "Milliken and Martins (1996)" - date should not be in the lead if the title of their book is not mentioned
- There is not one wiki-link in this article! I have never seen anything like this!
- "Most examples of groupthink in the literature" - groupthink?? Please explain
- "Founder David Kelly on a 60 minutes segment" - can this be more specific?
- "Studies suggest that diversity in attitudes and values may be associated with negative outcomes. [11]" - extra space before citation
- The Ineffective teams would benefit from a copyedit and a break as the paragraph is too long
- The See Also section is far too long, it should be cut back
Close - not listed edit
I am sorry to do this but I am going to have to fail this here and there without going any further, the article would benefit from a extensive copyedit even if it did not have severe WP:MOS issues. The references are not formatted correctly and there is also not one blue link in the article. I would recommend seeking help before re-nominating 
JAGUAR 19:42, 5 June 2015 (UTC)
Wiki Education assignment: UNDERSTANDING, LEADING AND MANAGING DIVERSITY edit
This article was the subject of a Wiki Education Foundation-supported course assignment, between 1 July 2022 and 31 August 2022. Further details are available on the course page. Student editor(s): Deolae (article contribs).
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