Talk:Fun and Games (Better Call Saul)/GA1

GA Review

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Reviewer: Sammi Brie (talk · contribs) 21:16, 16 January 2023 (UTC)

GA review (see here for what the criteria are, and here for what they are not)
It is reasonably well written. a (prose, spelling, and grammar): b (MoS for lead, layout, word choice, fiction, and lists): It is factually accurate and verifiable. a (references): b (citations to reliable sources): c (OR): d (copyvio and plagiarism): It is broad in its coverage. a (major aspects): b (focused): It follows the neutral point of view policy. Fair representation without bias: It is stable. No edit wars, etc.: It is illustrated by images, where possible and appropriate. a (images are tagged and non-free images have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):
Overall: Pass/Fail:
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Not much to do. 7-day hold to A person in Georgia and also notifying FishandChipper. Sammi Brie (she/her • t • c) 22:35, 16 January 2023 (UTC)

Made edits. Flowerkiller1692 (talk) 19:00, 23 January 2023 (UTC)

Copy changes

• of Nacho's death, remove comma Y
• Kim tells Jimmy she loves him, but they are bad for each other remove comma Y
• DATECOMMA after "October 5, 2021" Y
• More MOS:INOROUT fixes:
  • Harley complimented it and said it was "the sort of hardboiled, dark night of the soul stuff that Mike's storylines so frequently produce, and it's as excellent and heartbreaking as the rest." Y
  • that "you have to just sort of stand back and behold the pièce de résistance." Y
• Seehorn "nailed the moment as usual." Y

Sourcing and spot checks

Earwig flags pretty much entirely quotes with no issue. I do wonder if the length of the "covered essentially..." quote could be reduced a bit.

Is the NGNews247 (Nigeria!?) source needed? Doesn't seem like the highest-quality source at first blush.

Five sources were selected for spot checks:

• 12 (IndieWire): "Some of" should probably be "at least one" for the Instagram feed item. Checks out in all other uses. Y
• 13 (EW): We ended up orchestrating this dance with our camera crew that was very intimate Y
• 17: Tweet from Thomas Schnauz. I'm okay with this as ABOUTSELF and relevant. Y
• 20 (Vulture): 5-star rating and three reproduced quotes. Y
• 23 (EW): 33 Best list includes this episode. Y

Other items

• References are archived.
• The cover art has an NFUR, and the other image is libre licensed. The latter is missing alt text.

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