Talk:Frozen II/GA1

GA Review

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Reviewer: Some Dude From North Carolina (talk · contribs) 00:46, 12 July 2021 (UTC)

Comments? @Some Dude From North Carolina:. Wingwatchers (talk) 05:37, 12 July 2021 (UTC)

@Wingwatchers: He'll likely add them later. Just keep an eye out . Pamzeis (talk) 05:46, 12 July 2021 (UTC)

Infobox and lead

• Add alt text to the poster and the image in #Animation.

•  Done

• In the infobox, does "screenplay by" need a source?

• ... no, it's credited. Should I remove it?

Yes. Some Dude From North Carolina (talk) 11:52, 14 July 2021 (UTC)

 Removed

• "in in-universe" - bit repetitive

•  Fixed

• "in-universe perspective chronological timeline" - kinda wordy

•  Fixed

• "fan's aspiration" - should be plural, right?

•  Fixed

• "The film is notably darker tone and heavier in computer effects" → "The film contains a notably darker tone and is heavier in computer effects"

•  Done

Plot and cast

• "Afterwards" → "Afterward" (American English)

•  Done

• That's it. No issues with #Cast.

Production and marketing

• Did some copy-editing here and removed some long quotes.

Release

• As seen in this GA-article, add a subsection titled #Theatrical.

 Done Chompy Ace 00:49, 15 July 2021 (UTC)

• "46 languages ... four more than the first film, which was ... 42" - bit repetitive

 Done Wingwatchers (talk) 01:50, 15 July 2021 (UTC)

• "Following upon the success" → "Following the success"

 Done Wingwatchers (talk) 01:50, 15 July 2021 (UTC)

• "digital HD" should be written as "Digital HD"

 Done Wingwatchers (talk) 01:50, 15 July 2021 (UTC)

• "Blu-Ray" → "Blu-ray"

 Done Wingwatchers (talk) 01:50, 15 July 2021 (UTC)

• "included" → "include" (still available)

 Done Wingwatchers (talk) 01:50, 15 July 2021 (UTC)

• Add hyphens between "behind the scenes".

 Done Wingwatchers (talk) 01:50, 15 July 2021 (UTC)

• Put quotation marks around "Multi-Language Reel".

 Done Wingwatchers (talk) 01:50, 15 July 2021 (UTC)

• "songs performance" - reword

 Done Wingwatchers (talk) 01:53, 15 July 2021 (UTC)

• as well as multiple deleted songs: "Home" and "I Wanna Get This Right", and "Intro"; and removed footages: "Prologue", "Secret Room", "Had Nokks" and "A Place of Our Own" → as well as deleted music and footage (the "quoted" scenes don't really mean much to readers)

 Done Chompy Ace 00:54, 15 July 2021 (UTC)

• "It was initially" → "The film was initially"

 Done Wingwatchers (talk) 01:53, 15 July 2021 (UTC)

• "to released" → "to be released"

 Done Wingwatchers (talk) 01:53, 15 July 2021 (UTC)

Reception

• Wikilink D-Box.

 Done Chompy Ace 00:51, 15 July 2021 (UTC)

• "$42.2 million" → "$42.4 million"

•  Done

• "$130.3 million" → "$130.7 million"

•  Done

• Add a comma after the first use of "second weekend".

•  Done

• "$85.6 million" → "$85.2 million"

•  Done

• Add a hyphen between "highest grossing".

•  Done

• What source does "India ($3.1 million)" come from?

• Is actually Mexico based on a source from Deadline Hollywood.  Done Wingwatchers (talk) 02:15, 15 July 2021 (UTC)

• The PostTrak score needs a source.

It is already cited with the Deadline Hollywood source, Postrack is not a website. Some with a featured article, Atlantis: The Lost Empire.  Already done Wingwatchers (talk) 02:19, 15 July 2021 (UTC)

@Wingwatchers: I know that. The PostTrak score is not featured in that article. Some Dude From North Carolina (talk) 11:28, 15 July 2021 (UTC)

@Some Dude From North Carolina: Replaced. Pamzeis (talk) 11:55, 15 July 2021 (UTC)

• The recipients in #Accolades should be sorted by last name using this template.

•  Fixed

References

• Sources are archived.
• Wikilink David Faber (CNBC), Maureen Dowd, and Nell Minow.

 Done Chompy Ace 00:57, 15 July 2021 (UTC)

• WP:IBTIMES finds International Business Times "generally unreliable".

•  Fixed

• Sort categories in alphabetical order.

•  Done

@Pamzeis:, can you leave some tasks for me? Thanks. Wingwatchers (talk) 15:53, 14 July 2021 (UTC)

@Wingwatchers: I have added all my notes. Article is on hold. Some Dude From North Carolina (talk) 00:37, 15 July 2021 (UTC)

What do you mean? Do you mean you want me to not complete some of the notes so you can do them? Pamzeis (talk) 01:53, 15 July 2021 (UTC)

@Some Dude From North Carolina: Hopefully, all  Done. Pamzeis (talk) 02:48, 15 July 2021 (UTC)

@Pamzeis, Chompy Ace, and Wingwatchers: Great teamwork! Passing the article. Some Dude From North Carolina (talk) 00:51, 16 July 2021 (UTC)