Talk:French ironclad Revanche

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Reviewer: Hog Farm (talk · contribs) 01:32, 20 September 2020 (UTC)Reply

"f four 240-millimeter (9.4 in) Modèle 1864 MLRs" - You seem to have gotten your acronym transposed.
- Good catch.
"Positioned on the quarterdeck and the forecastle were another 194 mm RML" - not an RML. The 194 mms were smoothbore.
I wonder if it would be useful to indicate briefly the outcome of the Franco-Prussian War.
You don't seem to use de Balincourt & Vincent-Bréchignac 1975b

That's it. Good work here. Hog Farm _Bacon 02:26, 21 September 2020 (UTC)Reply

Thanks for the review.--Sturmvogel 66 (talk) 14:36, 21 September 2020 (UTC)Reply

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