Talk:French cruiser Jules Ferry/GA1
Latest comment: 4 years ago by Peacemaker67 in topic GA Review
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Reviewer: Peacemaker67 (talk · contribs) 03:18, 23 April 2020 (UTC)
This article is in good shape. I have a few comments:
- the displacement conversion is rounded differently in the infobox and body
- could you put a conversion in for the main gun calibre?
- It's in the lede.
- suggest "She was named after Jules Ferry, the former Prime Minister of France. Jean..." as the sentence construction is odd at present
- Good idea
- covering force and List of naval ministers of France are duplinked
- Pola is linked to a dab page
- link Victor Hugo
- File:Jules Ferry-Bougault-img 3139.jpg doesn't explain why it complies with PD-US, as it was published after 1925.
- updated.
That's all I could find, placing on hold for the above to be addressed. Peacemaker67 (click to talk to me) 08:44, 26 April 2020 (UTC)
- Thanks for the review.--Sturmvogel 66 (talk) 14:56, 26 April 2020 (UTC)
- No worries. This article is well-written, verifiable using reliable sources, covers the subject well, is neutral and stable, contains no plagiarism, and is illustrated by acceptably licensed images with appropriate captions. Passing. Peacemaker67 (click to talk to me) 02:35, 27 April 2020 (UTC)