Talk:French cruiser Jean Bart/GA1

Latest comment: 3 years ago by L293D in topic GA Review

GA Review edit

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Reviewer: L293D (talk · contribs) 00:55, 29 May 2020 (UTC)Reply


Will do. L293D ( • ) 00:55, 29 May 2020 (UTC)Reply

  • Jean Bart was a protected cruiser...
    • Good catch
  • File:Alger-Poyet.jpg: I'm not sure this image should be included at all. Not only are the sails wrong, but as far as I see there are no side gun barbettes depicted, plus the drawing shows two funnels, but not the two conning towers visible in the infobox image. Would File:Alger-class_cruiser_drawing.jpg be a better illustration?
    • The profile mentions that it's an early version of the design - I think it's still useful since it does a good job of showing the hull profile (the ram bow, overhanging stern, etc.)
  • link Channel
    • Done
  • Duguay-Trouin is a dab link
    • Fixed
  • Infobox and body disagree on number of torp tubes
    • Fixed
  • Did they break up the wreck?
    • I don't know - I haven't seen any reference to salvage operations, but I'd wager that at least some limited scrapping took place, at least as far as useful equipment goes.
  • ref No 2 should be pp.
    • Fixed
  • File:Alger-Poyet.jpg: I could be wrong, but aren't you supposed to add a US public domain tag also?
    • Good catch, I'll add one.

That's all. Nice work! L293D ( • ) 01:27, 29 May 2020 (UTC)Reply

Thanks! Parsecboy (talk) 19:25, 29 May 2020 (UTC)Reply
Great! Passing. L293D ( • ) 02:38, 30 May 2020 (UTC)Reply