Talk:French cruiser Galilée/GA1

Latest comment: 3 years ago by Peacemaker67 in topic GA Review

GA Review edit

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Reviewer: Peacemaker67 (talk · contribs) 08:57, 29 May 2020 (UTC)Reply


This is in good shape. Can you implement relevant changes from Talk:French cruiser Linois/GA1, then I'll take a look? Cheers, Peacemaker67 (click to talk to me) 01:28, 30 May 2020 (UTC)Reply

I think I've got them all here, and I remembered this too ;) Parsecboy (talk) 11:35, 30 May 2020 (UTC)Reply
  • suggest "she was the second member of the [[Linois-class cruiser|Linois class]], which was ordered as part of a construction program directed at strengthening the fleet's [[cruiser]] force"
    • Works for me
  • armor deck is a redlink?
    • I generally link to deck (ship), but another reviewer on a different article suggested I redlink to armor deck, which is probably something that'll get written at some point (to go along with various other components of ships armor like belt armor, torpedo bulkhead, etc.)
  • can you work "protected cruiser" and link into the Design section?
    • Sure can
  • the length doesn't match
    • Fixed - the shorter one was for Linois
  • can you drop the 0 in for the Beam in the infobox?
    • Done
  • link ship displacement
    • Done
  • 15 July.Further
    • Fixed
  • link Marseilles
    • Done
  • author-link Thomas Brassey
    • Done

That's all I could find, placing on hold for the above to be addressed. Peacemaker67 (click to talk to me) 10:25, 31 May 2020 (UTC)Reply

Thanks as always Parsecboy (talk) 13:27, 31 May 2020 (UTC)Reply
No worries. This article is well-written, verifiable using reliable sources, covers the subject well, is neutral and stable, contains no plagiarism, and is illustrated by acceptably licensed images with appropriate captions. Passing. Peacemaker67 (click to talk to me) 23:53, 31 May 2020 (UTC)Reply