Talk:French battleship Danton/GA1

GA Review

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Reviewer: MathewTownsend (talk · contribs) 20:15, 7 July 2012 (UTC)

• I'll review this. I like these French ships. MathewTownsend (talk) 20:15, 7 July 2012 (UTC)

review

• "made them rather unsuccessful ships" - is "rather" encyclopedic?
• I made a couple of edits; are they ok?[1]
• That's all. Good work, and on hold
  • As far as I know, "rather" isn't archaic or colloquial - it should be ok.
  • The comma looks good, but the link was to the wrong ship - another editor caught it though so it's good. Thanks for reviewing this article as well :) Parsecboy (talk) 14:41, 8 July 2012 (UTC)
• ok, all checks out per GA criteria. Pass! MathewTownsend (talk) 16:25, 8 July 2012 (UTC)