Talk:French battleship Charlemagne/GA1

GA Review

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Reviewer: MathewTownsend (talk · contribs) 19:11, 7 July 2012 (UTC)

• will review! MathewTownsend (talk) 19:11, 7 July 2012 (UTC)

review

• link needs disambiguation Review
  • Look at the disambiguation link more closely. Naval review, excepting British and American ones, redirect to the disambig page.
• "the ship supposedly collided" - would it be better to say "was said by [name] to have collided"?
  • Done. Thanks for the review.--Sturmvogel 66 (talk) 21:52, 7 July 2012 (UTC)
• Everything else is fine! Will put on hold awaiting a response. MathewTownsend (talk) 19:30, 7 July 2012 (UTC)

Comment on "c1" by BR

Article has conflated named references, with p. 121 being lost.

<ref name=c1>Caresse, p. 117</ref>
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<ref name=c1>Caresse, p. 121</ref>

Br'er Rabbit (talk) 23:57, 7 July 2012 (UTC)

Fixed. Thanks for catching that.--Sturmvogel 66 (talk) 00:59, 8 July 2012 (UTC)

You're welcome. Portuguese Man o' War (talk) 04:29, 8 July 2012 (UTC)

• ok, all problems are addressed. Article passes GA review. Very well done! MathewTownsend (talk) 01:12, 8 July 2012 (UTC)