Talk:Freedom of Expression (book)/GA1
Latest comment: 13 years ago by Johnfos in topic GA Review
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Reviewer: Johnfos (talk) 19:28, 4 March 2011 (UTC)
This article is close to meeting the GA criteria, but a couple of improvements relating to the issue of readability are needed:
- I would suggest that the Awards section be removed, as this small section interrupts the flow of the article and is already covered in the Reception section immediately below.
- Please review the direct quotations which are being used, as there are many of them and it may be better to paraphrase some, and trim the very long quotes where possible.
I am putting the article "on hold" until these issues are resolved. Johnfos (talk) 20:34, 4 March 2011 (UTC)