Talk:Francisco Coimbre/Archive 1

Latest comment: 16 years ago by Noble Story in topic GA Review

GA Review

I'm reviewing the article now, and I'll be posting my review shortly. Noble Story (talk) 01:55, 19 March 2008 (UTC)

Here's my review for the article
  1. Is it reasonably well written?
    A. Prose quality:  
    The article is not up to GA-quality in this respect. There are numerous mistakes in grammar and prose (most notably using "on" instead of "in"). It seems to be written by a non-native English speaker (no offense to the editors, but I'm being blunt). The writing has to be improved before it can be promoted.
    B. MoS compliance:  
  2. Is it factually accurate and verifiable?
    A. References to sources:  
    This is another aspect in which the article fails. There are many statements that are unsourced.
    B. Citation of reliable sources where necessary:  
    C. No original research:  
  3. Is it broad in its coverage?
    A. Major aspects:  
    B. Focused:  
  4. Is it neutral?
    Fair representation without bias:  
  5. Is it stable?
    No edit wars, etc:  
  1. Overall: Pass or Fail:  
    Usually I put an article on hold and try to help the nominator in correcting the article, but I think the edits are too large here to be done in a short amount of time. Try going back and correcting the prose, and adding citations to statements that need them.

Noble Story (talk) 10:20, 19 March 2008 (UTC)