Talk:Fountain for Company H/GA1

GA Review

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Reviewer: Hog Farm (talk · contribs) 18:56, 26 May 2020 (UTC)

Criteria

1. Prose  On hold

2. Verifiability  On hold

3. Depth of Coverage ✓ Pass

4. Neutral ✓ Pass

5. Stable ✓ Pass

6. Illustrations ✓ Pass

7. Miscellaneous ✓ Pass

Comments

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• " facing Multnomah County Courthouse along Southwest 4th" - Should it be "facing the Multnomah County Courthouse along Southwest 4th"
  •  Done ---Another Believer _(Talk) 17:24, 27 May 2020 (UTC)
• Link limestone in the text and the infobox
  •  Done ---Another Believer _(Talk) 17:25, 27 May 2020 (UTC)
• " 2.3 m × 1.6 m × 0.79 m (89 in × 63 in × 31 in)" - This is from the infobox. Given that this article is written in American English, shouldn't the American-style units be first, and then the metric units?
  • The contents in the infobox are automatically generated by the field entries. ---Another Believer _(Talk) 17:25, 27 May 2020 (UTC)
• To select a design, a city competition was announced in January 1914, with $450 appropriated for a fountain "to be executed in bronze and stone; contestants were required to submit "front and side elevations, section and plan" using "simple monotone wash renderings or pen and ink" - I count three open paranthesis, but only two close parantheses.
  •  Fixed ---Another Believer _(Talk) 17:26, 27 May 2020 (UTC)
• On February 13, an auxiliary meeting was held for "all present members and all women who joined at the time of the close of the war or since that time... whether they are members now or not,[7][10] so final arrangements could be made - There's only the open paranthesis, where's the close one?
  •  Fixed ---Another Believer _(Talk) 17:27, 27 May 2020 (UTC)
• "He said the war memorials sustained graffiti, which was removed by veterans within the group of occupiers, and confirmed all the public artworks on the site had received no major damage, as of late November" - Occupy Portland ended in December, is there a source that reflects the entire span of the event, confirming that no major damage occurred during the entire span?
  • I wish. I've searched and reviewed sourcing thoroughly and struggled with making the language say no vandalism had occurred as of the publication date. ---Another Believer _(Talk) 17:27, 27 May 2020 (UTC)

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• Do ISSNs exist for the Morning Oregonian and The Oregonian? You can use WorldCat
  • Added for The Oregonian (I assume the morning edition is the same?) ---Another Believer _(Talk) 17:29, 27 May 2020 (UTC)

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• Good to go now. Passing. Hog Farm (talk) 20:12, 27 May 2020 (UTC)
  • Thanks! ---Another Believer _(Talk) 22:58, 27 May 2020 (UTC)

The discussion above is closed. Please do not modify it. Subsequent comments should be made on the appropriate discussion page. No further edits should be made to this discussion.