Talk:Fort Washington Park (Manhattan)

Latest comment: 4 years ago by Cwmhiraeth
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The result was: promoted by Cwmhiraeth (talk) 07:12, 3 December 2019 (UTC)Reply

Lighthouse in Fort Washington Park
Lighthouse in Fort Washington Park

5x expanded by Epicgenius (talk). Self-nominated at 00:08, 28 September 2019 (UTC).Reply

  • A fine expansion. Article has been beefed up from 877 bytes to 8,280, easily more than five times and indeed closer to ten. Hook is interesting; I assume patch.com is a reliable source (although the piece seems to be travel promotion, the plain and dry fact of it being the only remaining lighthouse in Manhatten and situated under the GW Bridge is easily verifiable). No copyvio concerns - the tool complains about close paraphrasing of the American Scenic and Historic Preservation Society's full title, which I don't think is appropriate. Ritchie333 (talk) (cont) 16:14, 30 September 2019 (UTC)Reply
  • I have pulled this from the queue as it appears there are at least two other extant lighthouses in Manhattan, Blackwell Island Light and the Titanic Memorial (New York City). Pinging Epicgenius and Ritchie333. Please note that when checking claims of exclusivity like this, it's important to double check them with a google search as such claims are often erroneous. The ALT hook also has an issue in that the lighthouse is not actually "under" the bridge, but "in its shadow", so I couldn't use it, and IMO the hook is not all that great anyhow. Gatoclass (talk) 12:52, 22 October 2019 (UTC)Reply

Let me suggest

ALT2 ... that there is a lighthouse under the George Washington Bridge in Fort Washington Park?

Reads more smoothly. EEng 15:54, 18 November 2019 (UTC)Reply

EEng, thanks for the suggestion. I like this one. epicgenius (talk) 02:00, 19 November 2019 (UTC)Reply
Geniuses think alike, of course. EEng 05:31, 19 November 2019 (UTC)Reply
  • Alt2 (either one, looks good to me. --evrik (talk) 17:39, 21 November 2019 (UTC)Reply