Talk:Forbidden Fruit (J. Cole song)/GA1

GA Review

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Reviewer: DepressedPer (talk · contribs) 02:20, 18 August 2014 (UTC)

I'll be taking the position of reviewing this article. DepressedPer (talk) 02:20, 18 August 2014 (UTC)

Comments from non-reviewer: Lead seems rather short, and I see a couple of bare URL's. Those are not good signs. Snuggums (talk / edits) 05:21, 19 August 2014 (UTC)

• The article is not that long, the lead is proportional to the article length as it should be. I expanded it now anyways. Took me a couple seconds to get the refs too. Judging by the review, looks like those signs were wrong. STATic message me! 15:49, 19 August 2014 (UTC)

Here's what I found in the article:

• Expand the lead with mention of the song it samples and the mixed reviews it got.
  •  Done Before I even started reading this, we had the same idea on what to expand the lead with. STATic message me!
• WP:OVERCITE in the Background section for Refs. 1 and 4.
  •  Done STATic message me! 15:49, 19 August 2014 (UTC)
• Pictures of J. Cole and Kendrick Lamar would help boost the article.
  • Not enough room for both without squishing the text, but I did add one. STATic message me! 15:49, 19 August 2014 (UTC)
• Ref. #4: Complex's publisher is Complex Media.
• Refs. #5 and #6 need citations.
• Ref. #8: Exclaim!'s publisher is Ian Danzig.
• Ref. #9: Now's publisher is Now Communications.
• Ref. #10: AllMusic's publisher is All Media Network.
• Ref. #11: Los Angeles Times publisher is Tribune Company.
• Ref. #12: Spin's publisher is Spin Media.
  • Everything else is  Done. STATic message me! 15:49, 19 August 2014 (UTC)

Other than that, Its well-written and mentions info in the right places. It's great that your putting work into Hip hop articles. DepressedPer (talk) 05:48, 19 August 2014 (UTC)

Thank you, I also appreciate your work in hip hop articles, there definitely is not enough of us. STATic message me! 15:49, 19 August 2014 (UTC)

Everything looks good to pass it as a GA. Congratulations! DepressedPer (talk) 20:53, 19 August 2014 (UTC)

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