Talk:Food desert in West Oakland

Deletion

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The result of this discussion was to merge and deleted some parts.Skingski (talk) 19:37, 18 July 2017 (UTC)(talk)

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Do we really need an article on this? This seems more like it's someone's community college essay. There are lots of food deserts in America, this one is not special. --Therealelizacat (talk) 22:17, 24 October 2016 (UTC)

I agree. Most of it has nothing to do with Food Deserts. The relevant part could be merged into the general page on food deserts. I don't know what one would do with the rest if not deletion...Skingski (talk) 05:52, 3 July 2017 (UTC)(talk)

Slimming down page to prepare for merger. And yes, it clearly is someone named McClintock's essay here.Skingski (talk) 04:22, 18 July 2017 (UTC)(talk)

Deleting sections that are not specific to West Oakland. Some info will be merged into the main page on Food desert.Skingski (talk) 04:54, 18 July 2017 (UTC)(talk)

Moved sections into Farmers' market and Supermarket shortage as noted.Skingski (talk) 16:54, 18 July 2017 (UTC)(talk)

I just realized, THE key measure of a food desert is distance to a store that offers healthy food. No evidence is provided whatsoever to establish that this is true. So the title of the article page is unsupported.Skingski (talk) 14:46, 18 July 2017 (UTC)(talk) <End of discussion>

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Redundant references

The same references are cited multiple times without combining them.Skingski (talk) 04:07, 18 July 2017 (UTC)(talk)

Fixed.Skingski (talk) 04:22, 18 July 2017 (UTC)(talk)

Tags and redirect

"merge to|Food desert|date=March 2017" and "essay-like|date=May 2014 tags" fixed. Redirected page to Food desert as that is the more likely destination a wiki researcher would go.Skingski (talk) 19:37, 18 July 2017 (UTC)(talk)