Talk:Fly Fusion Pentop Computer
Latest comment: 16 years ago by Jayron32 in topic Pens Problems section
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Comment edit
If anyone would like to make my article better, please do. I would appreciate it. ;-) --Princess Janay (talk) 14:43, 25 January 2008 (UTC)
Proper Title edit
Shouldn't this article be FLY Fusion Pentop Computer since that is the product name? QAE 07:47, 27 January 2008 (UTC)
Didn't Think About It edit
You're right... I didn't think about that. --Princess Janay (talk) 19:10, 28 January 2008 (UTC)
Pens Problems section edit
Has probably got to go. Its basically the personal opinions of the writer of the article. In general, we need some real sources here as well. --Jayron32.talk.contribs 02:42, 10 February 2008 (UTC)