Talk:Festivali i Këngës 59/GA1

GA Review

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Reviewer: K. Peake (talk · contribs) 14:24, 10 January 2021 (UTC)

Good Article review progress box Criteria: 1a. prose () 1b. MoS () 2a. ref layout () 2b. cites WP:RS () 2c. no WP:OR () 2d. no WP:CV () 3a. broadness () 3b. focus () 4. neutral () 5. stable () 6a. free or tagged images () 6b. pics relevant () Note: this represents where the article stands relative to the Good Article criteria. Criteria marked are unassessed

I will start reviewing this today after you have made all of the suggested changes to the other article I reviewed; feel free to tell me if the number of reviews is too much at once and you will not be able to respond to this one by tomorrow. --K. Peake 14:24, 10 January 2021 (UTC)

Kyle Peake Thank you for your fast reviews, that's of course fine for me.--Lorik17 (talk) 14:45, 10 January 2021 (UTC)

Infobox and lead

• Target Radio Televizioni Shqiptar to RTSH
• "on 21 and 22 December, and" → "on 21 and 22 December, respectively, and"
• "the competition did not used" → "the competition did not use"
• "as traditionally at the" → "in the traditional location of the"
• "in an open-air location at the Sheshi Italia." maybe reword this slightly while keeping the same meaning, as it is a bit too repetitive of earlier in this para?
• "of the contest will therefore" → "of the contest and will therefore"
• "in the Eurovision Song Contest 2021 Rotterdam," → "for the Eurovision Song Contest 2021 in Rotterdam,"

Background and format

• "was organised by RTSH" → "was organised by Radio Televizioni Shqiptar (RTSH)" with the target
• "on 21 and 22 December, and" → "on 21 and 22 December, respectively, and"
• "The three shows were" → "The three live shows were"
• "and Albanian host Blendi Salaj." → "and host Blendi Salaj." since "Albanian" being the nationality used earlier in the sentence makes it obvious he is too

Impact of the COVID-19 pandemic

• "was not held as traditionally at" → "was not held per tradition at"
• Target open-air to Open-air concert

Contestants

• "in the competition between" → "in Festivali i Këngës between"
• "of twenty-six artists and songs" → "of 26 artists and songs" per MOS:NUM
• "On 16 November," → "On 16 November 2020,"
• Artist(s) → Artist, as none of the instances feature more than one
• Composer(s) → Composer, per above

Semi-finals

Semi-final 1

• "the official studio version of their entries." → "the official studio versions of their respective entries." or something similar since otherwise it sounds like they performed a studio version of all their entries together
• "the selected eighteen songs to" → "the selected 18 songs to"
• Artist(s) → Artist, per earlier comment

Semi-final 2

• "acoustic version of their entries." → "acoustic versions of their respective entries." with the target, per earlier comment
• Add the appropriate source(s) to the table
• Artist(s) → Artist, per earlier comment

Final

• "Before the end of the show," → "Before the end of the competition,"
• "as the winner of the competition" → "as the winner" since these two suggestions being implemented helps make things less wordy
• Remove wikilink on Eurovision Song Contest 2021
• Add the appropriate source(s) to the table
• Artist(s) → Artist, per earlier comment

Broadcasters

• Target live streams to Live streaming
• "through their official YouTube channel" → "of Festivali i Këngës through their official YouTube channel"
• See MOS:TABLECAPTION
• Broadcaster(s) → Broadcaster, per earlier comment
• Centre the refs

See also

• Good

Notes

• Good

References

• Copyvio score looks good at 21.9%; ignore the URLs that have been flagged as too high because none of them are used as sources anywhere in this article
• Ref 23 is the only one that still needs archiving
• WP:OVERLINK of Wiwibloggs on ref 12

Final comments and verdict

•  On hold until you have fixed everything; the article was on the verge of edit warring but that got resolved weeks ago. --K. Peake 17:06, 10 January 2021 (UTC)

@Kyle Peake: I responded to your comments. The edit warning was related to the final results which in the end were fake.--Lorik17 (talk) 17:43, 10 January 2021 (UTC)

@Iaof2017: Yeah I recognised that since the resolving summary did mention it as well as solving the issues, which is why I marked the article as stable. ✓ Pass now, but don't change this from future to GA class because the Eurovision Song Contest that this was held for still has yet to happen. --K. Peake 17:56, 10 January 2021 (UTC)

Kyle Peake thanks for the reminder and the successful review. Best regards!--Lorik17 (talk) 18:00, 10 January 2021 (UTC)