Talk:Fernando de la Rúa
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Reviewer: Sainsf (talk · contribs) 07:07, 22 June 2016 (UTC)
Will review. Sainsf (talk · contribs) 07:07, 22 June 2016 (UTC)
Fairly well-written. Only a few comments: Sainsf (talk · contribs) 11:28, 22 June 2016 (UTC)
- General
- Refer to him consistently as "De la Rúa" once you have mentioned him by full name.
- Stick to either "%" or "percent" consistently
- Early life
- Wikilink "Peronist"
- Mayor of Buenos Aires
- "Buenos Aires" is a duplink
- Presidential elections
- Wikilink Carlos Menem
- Presidency
- An inline explanation, short one, would help for piqueteros. Try the same for "War on Terror"
- Mention Cavallo by his full name only on first mention
- Cavallo's name is a linked twice, and both are duplinks
- Public image
- He was nicknamed "Chupete" because of this What exactly does his nickname translate to?
- De la Rúa suffered from Arteriosclerosis Why does the disease name begin with caps?
- Done, except for the requested wikilink to Carlos Menem. He had already been wikilinked in "Early life", at the point Menem was elected president. Cambalachero (talk) 14:55, 22 June 2016 (UTC)
Thank you. I am happy to promote this. Sainsf (talk · contribs) 05:46, 23 June 2016 (UTC)
Public image section
editThe medical sentence isn't clear/logical. "Although it is a standard, simple medical intervention, the medic told the press De la Rúa suffered from arteriosclerosis, which is usually linked with a lack of speed and reflexes" - what intervention? Also, Parkinson's gives lack of speed and reflexes. Atherosclerosis would give leg pain and risk of limb loss. This need clarification, potentially a different source. I don't have the Reato source to check myself. MartinezMD (talk) 02:18, 7 November 2022 (UTC)