Talk:Ferdinand I of Naples

Latest comment: 1 year ago by Deliusfan in topic Another sentence needs repair

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'Remarkable feudal possessions' - can this be clarified please. Jackiespeel (talk) 10:15, 16 August 2014 (UTC)Reply

He was born in the city of Valencia, Kingdom of Valencia, Crown of Aragon, not Kingdom of Aragon. I don't know how to correct this in the side panel etc.

infringement of copyright edit

@BrownHairedGirl:@Aldebaran69:@Rodw:@Gonnym:@ZI Jony:@Marcocapelle:@Kansas Bear:@Saumeira:@Frid-arlon: The content of this page violated copyright when it was translated by Pietro Espasian from the voice into Italian. Maybe it takes an administrator's intervention to hide his changes? Or, being a translation, does it not infringe copyright?--Beaest (talk) 13:25, 30 January 2022 (UTC)Reply

This sentence needs to be fixed edit

Alfonso then concluded with the Venetians that he would attack the Florentines and the Venetian the Sforza.

"...the Venetian the Sforza" might should mean that the Venetians would attack the Sforza holdings (Milan); in that case a simple S has been deleted. If not, then some words have been deleted accidentally and need to be replaced. I don't know the subject well enough to make this determination. Deliusfan (talk) 19:28, 23 August 2022 (UTC)Reply

Another sentence needs repair edit

The Pope to thwart the danger from which he had threatened the Italy tried to unite the Italian governments in his will to make them act against the invasion of the Turks and absolved the Florentines from excommunication, forgiving them for all the injuries done to the Church;

I'm thinking it should start out, "The pope, in order to thwart the danger which threatened Italy..." But after that I'm a little unsure what to do as there are a lot of ideas and important historical concepts jammed in this single phrase. It looks like the sentence was rewritten but then made worse rather than more clear. Deliusfan (talk) 19:51, 23 August 2022 (UTC)Reply