Talk:Federico murder case

Latest comment: 4 years ago by JackMeraxes in topic Background section

Articles for deletion/Joshua Federico

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Articles for deletion/Joshua Federico discussion located here ~ Wiki-psyc (talk) 20:51, 27 December 2018 (UTC)Reply

  • User:Wiki-psyc parts of text continue to be confusing, like the sequence, When did she go into hiding? Also, It is important to show taht there is ONGOING coverage and that a crime is covered by national and regional media, and that it was covered in articles that were more INDEPTH than routine crime coverage. See: WP:NCRIME.E.M.Gregory (talk) 18:51, 19 December 2018 (UTC)Reply
Retitled and Rewritten - Your content suggestion has merit. This media coverage is similar to the state of the Watts family murder case when that article was initiated. There are 100 or so Google entries on this case and there will be additional information disclosed as this story unfolds. Hopefully other editors will engage and expand/improve this article. For now, the article has been rewritten to be about the crime, not the person. It has also been re-titled as suggested; now "Federico murder case". It certainly can be improved further. Wiki-psyc (talk) 13:55, 20 December 2018 (UTC)Reply

Background section

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Should this section be moved closer to the beginning of the article? It seems strange to go through the murders, investigation, criminal charges, and trial before actually introducing the people involved and their connections to each other. JackMeraxes (talk) 01:38, 26 May 2020 (UTC)Reply