Talk:Farmers' Museum
Latest comment: 12 years ago by CooperstownFan in topic Carousel Production Sentence Clarified.
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Carousel Production Sentence Clarified. edit
Changed the sentence "The carousel was produced over two decades through the work of Gerry Holzman of Islip, NY, and over 1,000 volunteers from across New York state." to the following: "The carousel is the result of efforts made by carver Gerry Holzman of Islip, NY and over 1,000 volunteers from across New York State. The entire production took over two decades." I feel this change is much more readable, and more accurately reflects the intent of the original statement. CooperstownFan (talk) 18:02, 25 August 2011 (UTC)