Talk:Facing History and Ourselves

Sandbox edits for proposed page improvements

Beyond My Ken, given your recent reverts of edits I conducted on this page (and Enrique's Journey, please see that Talk page as well), I have elected to begin a civil yet thorough discussion of some (in my view) obvious edits that could be made to both pages that would both bring the page up to better MOS standards (which I understand may not particularly interest you, fair enough) but would also improve the page itself.

Please see my sandbox for Facing History and Ourselves. I believe these edits address a number of problems with the page, namely an over-reliance on primary sources, other sourcing issues (I actually had to remove a number of sources just to get my sandbox to save because it thought a number of the existing sources were proxies), and general content edits that improve the flow and readability of the page (just in my opinion perhaps).

I hope that we can have a productive dialogue concerning this page and collaborate on the highest quality version we can attain (oh and if anyone else would care to chime in, please do!). Central Midfielder (talk) 17:24, 23 December 2020 (UTC)

Discussion needs to take place here, not in your sandbox. Beyond My Ken (talk) 18:35, 23 December 2020 (UTC)