Talk:Exercise Hell Tank

Latest comment: 9 months ago by AirshipJungleman29 in topic Did you know nomination

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The result was: rejected by reviewer, closed by AirshipJungleman29 talk 23:21, 27 January 2024 (UTC)Reply

 
Scout helicopters armed with SS.11 missiles were used in Hell Tank.

Created by Maury Markowitz (talk). Self-nominated at 19:03, 20 November 2023 (UTC). Post-promotion hook changes for this nom will be logged at Template talk:Did you know nominations/Exercise Hell Tank; consider watching this nomination, if it is successful, until the hook appears on the Main Page.Reply

Just a comment but I don't think linking helicopters and tanks is necessary here given they're common knowledge. Besides, ideally we'd want readers to learn about the tank and too many links may distract. Narutolovehinata5 (talk · contributions) 02:07, 23 December 2023 (UTC)Reply
General: Article is new enough and long enough
Policy: Article is sourced, neutral, and free of copyright problems
Hook: Hook has been verified by provided inline citation
  • Cited:  
  • Interesting:  
Image: Image is freely licensed, used in the article, and clear at 100px.
QPQ: Done.

Overall:   If the image is to be used, it needs a better caption to tie it to whatever hook is used. New QPQ still needed. New hook options needed. I've suggested some potential directions. Seddon talk 02:22, 28 December 2023 (UTC)Reply

@Maury Markowitz: Per Seddon's review I've struck the currently provided QPQ, so a new one needs to be provided. Narutolovehinata5 (talk · contributions) 06:25, 2 January 2024 (UTC)Reply

Sorry this one slipped off my radar. So...

  • ATL1 ... that a British Army participant in 1967's Exercise Hell Tank, testing the use of missile-firing helicopters, suggested the helicopters killed 45 tanks with no losses when the tanks attempted an offensive breakout?

@Narutolovehinata5: Also touched up the caption. I believe the image is from the phase 1 hell tank exercise (the E marking), but have not found anything that states that directly. QPQ is Empire of the Sultans. Maury Markowitz (talk) 15:20, 2 January 2024 (UTC)Reply

Pinging reviewer Seddon. ~~ AirshipJungleman29 (talk) 02:15, 15 January 2024 (UTC)Reply
  All looking good. ALT 1 feels much clearer. QPQ done. Seddon talk 00:46, 19 January 2024 (UTC}
I really am sorry to approve this and then immediately open the nomination again. With the benefit of hindsight, this is a simple "person does their job" hook. Is there anything more interesting?--Launchballer 03:22, 24 January 2024 (UTC)Reply
Hi, @Launchballer: I noticed this re-opening when I was reviewing the nom that Seddon used this as a QPQ for. I think that hook should be approved as highly interesting. That a British Army soldier publicly appraised helicopters–fairly frail and nascent things at the time–as overwhelmingly defeating heavily armored and armed tanks is a significant thing. This is not so much "man does job" as "event suggests paradigm shift". ~ Pbritti (talk) 19:48, 24 January 2024 (UTC)Reply
Fair enough. (My comment may have been coloured by AirshipJungleman29 describing this hook as man does job. I'll reapprove it.--Launchballer 19:53, 24 January 2024 (UTC)Reply
  This hook was pulled per a conversation on WT:DYK. Please address those concerns before it is approved again. Z1720 (talk) 16:35, 27 January 2024 (UTC)Reply
As there has been consensus at WT:DYK to halt the practice of unlimited workshopping of old nominations, and this is well over the two-month mark, I'm marking this nomination as rejected. ~~ AirshipJungleman29 (talk) 23:21, 27 January 2024 (UTC)Reply