Talk:Evolve (video game)/GA1

GA Review

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Reviewer: Jaguar (talk · contribs) 23:16, 13 January 2016 (UTC)

Shall get to this soon. JAGUAR  23:16, 13 January 2016 (UTC)

• "The game is powered by Crytek's CryEngine to create the dark and dense forests in the game" - how does the game engine make the game darker? I'm not sure if I see the relevance
• 'Monster' is linked twice in the body of the article
• Are the hunters humans? I don't think this is clarified in the gameplay section
• "These bots can control up to four of the characters, allowing between one to five human players in any game mode" - or hunter?
• "When eighth generation video game consoles were released, the team realised" - realized, if you want to stay consistent
• "The "Incapacitation" mechanics were saved, while the "AI Director" was removed" - these mechanics will sound unfamiliar to some readers, especially me, as I've never played these games so I wouldn't know
• "Ashton claimed that Evolve would have the best support for downloadable content ever" - this needs a quotation mark, as "best support ever" sounds informal
• No dead links

Very good. Once they're all done, this can pass. JAGUAR  16:04, 15 January 2016 (UTC)

@Jaguar: Thanks for the review! I have fixed the issues you raised above. It allows one to four player characters in a game mode, including the monster. Thank you once again! AdrianGamer (talk) 04:30, 16 January 2016 (UTC)

Thanks, promoted JAGUAR  14:42, 16 January 2016 (UTC)