Talk:Eugene Dibble
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Feedback for LauraBou
Great job on the edits to this article! I think you added some really great information to the Tuskegee section. I do have a few suggestions, but nothing major. 1. In the first section, Early Life and Education, it might be a good idea to rename it Early Life and Career or keep it as it is and move around some information to a new Career subsection. I'm specifically referring to information toward the end, when talking about his residency and role in the army. This is more about his career and could be moved to a later section or Personal Life. 2. One question I had was when you mentioned that he paid for the education of medical students. Could you expand on this a bit? I was just interested in the topic and it would be nice if you could write a bit more of an explanation for that. Once again, great job on the article! Krahaman1 (talk) 23:48, 4 May 2017 (UTC)
Overall I think this article is very well written and researched. I thought the sections were broken up pretty well and had a good structure and flow. The only suggestion I would make is to be careful not to ascribe feelings/emotions/thoughts and to remain neutral. This is very minor though and i thought the article was not only engaging and thorough but very well organized. Hhowar12 (talk) 00:06, 9 May 2017 (UTC)
Wiki Education Foundation-supported course assignment edit
This article is or was the subject of a Wiki Education Foundation-supported course assignment. Further details are available on the course page. Student editor(s): LauraBou, ArjavS, Yennyyang, Zsmith7. Peer reviewers: Vfang3, Krahaman1, Diegoluytoto, Haley Wendt.
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