Talk:Ethel Kibblewhite

Latest comment: 3 years ago by OakkRaider in topic Essay-like

Essay-like edit

The tone and the writing style needs to be improved in my humble opinion. It sounds like an essay especially after reading the content in the Marriage section; I have therefore added a tag to indicate so. If there's any mistake, you may undo or simply reach out! OakkRaider (talk) 14:20, 17 March 2021 (UTC)Reply