Talk:Ernst Johann von Biron

Latest comment: 12 years ago by Bob Burkhardt in topic POV

POV edit

Is there for too colorful laguage in the later half of the section, which paints very bad picture of the subject ~~Xil (talk) 22:43, 25 July 2010 (UTC)Reply

Yes. Even early in the article: "shabby court" indeed. The EB1911 POV hasn't been properly filtered out. I will see what I can do. I also have a second source which should help moving the article toward objectivity. Bob Burkhardt (talk) 11:03, 30 August 2011 (UTC)Reply
Having added the second source (1905 NIE), I think it too paints about as bad a picture, but it is more specific on details and doesn't just rely on colorful adjectives. And it does concede he was a good administrator. So I hope with this, and my previous edit to further resolve the 1911 Britannica POV problem, the article can be called somewhat more objective. I have removed the POV banner. Bob Burkhardt (talk) 12:53, 30 August 2011 (UTC)Reply