Talk:Eric Kuhn

Latest comment: 5 years ago by JSFarman in topic Edit request

Edit request edit

I would like to update this article. Layer 3 was bought by T-Mobile in January. [1] Eric Kuhn is a producer of Harvey Fierstein's play Torch Song on Broadway [2] and he is now on the board of directors for Seriesfest. [3] Also since the sale it is more accurate to list his occupation as "media entrepreneur." References are below. Thank you. 206.29.176.52 (talk) 22:05, 4 January 2019 (UTC)Reply

Hello - I am assuming you are the same person that submitted the original article. Future ref - make sure to sign your posts with four tildes - your username will show up automatically.
I saw that Layer3 was bought by T-Mobile a while ago and I planned to add it to the article. I will add it as soon as I have a chance, and I'll make the other changes as well. Thanks for following the COI guidelines. JSFarman (talk) 20:16, 14 January 2019 (UTC)Reply
I made the changes you requested and also removed some of the detail (which seemed a bit gratuitous) and the name dropping. No offense.  :) JSFarman (talk) 23:34, 22 January 2019 (UTC)Reply

References edit

References

  1. ^ fung, Eric. "Analysis | What the T-Mobile and Sprint merger means for you". Washington Post. Retrieved 2018-10-25. {{cite web}}: Cite has empty unknown parameter: |1= (help)
  2. ^ "Harvey Fierstein's Torch Song Begins Broadway Previews With Michael Urie and Mercedes Ruehl October 9 | Playbill". Playbill. Retrieved 2018-10-25.
  3. ^ "Team | SeriesFest". SeriesFest | Season 5: June 21–June 26, 2019. Retrieved 2018-10-25.

Editing for tone, NPOV, etc edit

I've started an edit on this, removed some of the detail, some of the awards, etc. The issue for me is that it's difficult to find a balance. There's a huge amount of press that documents his career, awards, etc. I'll go over the refs etc soon and look for more places to prune, but, if anyone else is up for it...JSFarman (talk) 21:43, 26 June 2017 (UTC)Reply

Checked the refs, removed what might be perceived as hype (speaking engagements...I don't think it's hype, personally, but I'm erring on the side of caution.) Justlettersandnumbers, would you give it a look? Thanks, JSFarman (talk) 22:56, 3 July 2017

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I'm going to remove the peacock tag - the article has been pruned. JSFarman (talk) 15:59, 6 July 2017 (UTC)Reply