Talk:Equatorial Kundu

Latest comment: 17 years ago by Hnsampat in topic In-Universe Style Clean Up

"Kundu" is also the name of the East African village at the beginning of "The African Queen", 1951, starring Katherine Hepburn and Humphrey Bogart.

In-Universe Style Clean Up edit

I wrote an intro to better establish Kundu's establish context in the show, how it represents African nations and elaborating on the allusions to the Rwandan genocide and the differing Clinton/Bartlet responses to the situation, but in was reverted for being too speculative. How do we edit the article to meet quality standards? 82.153.15.249

Basically, the article needs to discuss things not as if they actually happened but as if they are events on the show. Primarily, this means that this article needs to be written in *present* tense and not past tense. Also, it should include more references to episodes (i.e. "In the episode XYZ, it is said that..." --Hnsampat 16:29, 15 April 2007 (UTC)Reply