Talk:Equatorial Guinea at the 2012 Summer Olympics
Latest comment: 7 years ago by Miyagawa in topic GA Review
 | Equatorial Guinea at the 2012 Summer Olympics has been listed as one of the Sports and recreation good articles under the good article criteria. If you can improve it further, please do so. If it no longer meets these criteria, you can reassess it. Review: October 30, 2016. (Reviewed version). |
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Reviewer: Miyagawa (talk · contribs) 16:15, 28 October 2016 (UTC)
Grabbing for a review tonight/tomorrow. Miyagawa (talk) 16:15, 28 October 2016 (UTC)
Sorry for the delay, let's get to that review.
- You've used "debut" in the lead, but "début" in the background. Should really be one or the other.
- Could the following be rephrased to avoid using slowest/slower three times in a single sentence: "his slowest time was 11.05 seconds slower than the slowest athlete in his heat who progressed to the semi-finals and, therefore" - perhaps drop the second half of the argument, and instead say something along the lines of "his slowest time was 11.05 seconds slower than the required time in his head to progress to the semi-finals", that'll get rid of one of them anyway.
Otherwise, a top notch article. I wouldn't have noted those two issues if I wasn't being particularly nit picky. Miyagawa (talk) 10:59, 30 October 2016 (UTC)