Talk:Eoghan O'Connell

GA Review

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Reviewer: MWright96 (talk · contribs) 07:58, 14 April 2018 (UTC)

Reviewing this as part of a GA sweep. Comments will appear soon. MWright96 (talk) 07:58, 14 April 2018 (UTC)

1. It is reasonably well written.

   a (prose): b (MoS for lead, layout, word choice, fiction, and lists):

2. It is factually accurate and verifable.

   a (reference section): b (citations to reliable sources): c (OR):

3. It is broad in its coverage.

   a (major aspects): b (focused):

4. It follows the neutral point of view policy.

   Fair representation without bias:

5. It is stable.

   No edit wars, etc.:

6. It is illustrated by images and other media, where possible and appropriate.

   a (images are tagged and non-free content have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):

7. Overall:

   Pass/Fail:

Lead

• Remove the second wikilink for Bury in the first paragraph as it is not necessary

Done. RRD (talk) 16:26, 16 April 2018 (UTC)

Celtic

• "O'Connell played for the academy teams of the Irish clubs College Corinthians and Avondale United," reword to O'Connell played for the College Corinthians and Avondale United Irish academy teams,
• "Commenting about the new contract, he said "I'm delighted and just happy to get it done"." - a comma is needed between "said" and "I'm"
• "manager Brendan Rodgers said O'Connell was outstanding and added;" - outstanding should be in quotations otherwise it should be replaced with a neutral word
• "He made his debut in a 4–1 victory over Sheffield United;" - He debuted in a 4-1 victory over Sheffield United;

Done. RRD (talk) 16:26, 16 April 2018 (UTC)

Bury

• "On 8 June 2017, O'Connell signed a three-year contract with English League One club Bury" - try O'Connell signed a three-year contract with English League One club Bury on 8 June 2017.
• "O'Connell was injured during the pre-season and was ruled out of play for 10 months." - add the specific type of injury O'Connell sustained
• "1–0 victory over Blackburn Rovers in the EFL Trophy." - the EFL Trophy link should be to 2017–18 EFL Trophy and not to the tournament in general

Done. RRD (talk) 16:26, 16 April 2018 (UTC)

International career

• "for the qualifiers of 2017 UEFA European Under-21 Championship against Slovenia and Serbia." -reword to for the 2017 UEFA European Under-21 Championship qualifiers against Slovenia and Serbia.

Done. RRD (talk) 16:26, 16 April 2018 (UTC)

Style of play

• "His manager at Celtic, Brendan Rodgers," - Brendan Rodgers doesn't need to be wikilinked here
• Same issue about linking with when Celtic is first mentioned

Done. 16:26, 16 April 2018 (UTC)

Personal life

• "Other notable family members include his grandfather Frankie O'Connell, who served as a board delegate on the Cork County board for many years." - needs to be citated to a reliable source.

Removed.16:26, 16 April 2018 (UTC)

References

• References 5, 10, 15, 21, 32 and 37 are missing the authors

32 has no author; but the authors of others have been added. 16:26, 16 April 2018 (UTC)

Overall, you've written a neat and compact article. Just got the above quibbles to sort out. MWright96 (talk) 20:35, 14 April 2018 (UTC)

@MWright96: The issues raised have been fixed. RRD (talk) 16:26, 16 April 2018 (UTC)

@Royroydeb: Thank you. Now promoting to GA class. MWright96 (talk) 17:45, 16 April 2018 (UTC)