Talk:Entropy-vorticity wave
Latest comment: 1 month ago by Ldm1954 in topic Feedback from New Page Review process
Feedback from New Page Review process edit
I left the following feedback for the creator/future reviewers while reviewing this article: I think the page and lead could do with rewriting so it is more "gentle", more understandable by a novice. There are also some form aspects which should be edited, for instance "well-known" in the lead, use of "we" in the derivation. An image would be very good.