Talk:Endeavor (company)/Archives/2014

Latest comment: 9 years ago by Zigzig20s in topic Advertisement tag?

User:Edward321 says the page is "promotional." How so, specifically? I don't think it is. Thank you.Zigzig20s (talk) 05:21, 2 October 2014 (UTC)

There are many sentences that contain wp:puffery such as The Endeavor Talent Agency launched in 1995, nearly 100 years after WMA, and rapidly grew to include clients from every facet of the entertainment industry This is ad copy, not encyclopedic content. Articles should be written with an encyclopedic wp:tone. Jim1138 (talk) 08:31, 2 October 2014 (UTC)
Why don't you fix it to be more constructive?Zigzig20s (talk) 15:05, 2 October 2014 (UTC)