Talk:Empower Orphans

Latest comment: 14 years ago by Bobby1011 in topic Overhaul

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I have added references. This should prevent it from being deleted. I will now continue to add more information. This would prove that the articles are notable and need to remain on wiki.

Article on Empower Orphans should not be deleted. Reason for notability is:

Empower Orphans has already made significant enhancements in the lives of orphaned and underprivileged children. ~ Started a library at an orphanage to directly benefit 200 orphaned children. ~ Provided school books, school bags, shoes, food, blankets and sweaters to 200 orphans. ~ Conducted an Eye Clinic and Dental Clinic for 360 underprivileged children. Additionally, 56 children with acute eye problems and 103 children with acute dental problems were sponsored for treatment. ~ Provided annual scholarships to 10 children ~ Provided 10 sewing machines to older girls, so that they can start earning a living. ~ Obtained a grant for building another library at an underprivileged school.

The Founder has also won a number of national awards/recognition: ~ Gold Medal of the President’s Volunteer Service Award. ~ Wachovia Corporation’s 2008 “Who Would You Thank” national award ~ Finalist of the Philadelphia Inquirer’s 2008 Citizen of the Year Award. ~ Amazing Kids of the Month Award ~ Volunteer effort highlighted in a number of national and international newspapers (including Philadelphia Inquirer) —Preceding unsigned comment added by Anvcomp (talkcontribs) 17:07, 24 December 2009 (UTC)Reply

I am not sure where you received the information on $10000 raised so far. This is not correct. —Preceding unsigned comment added by Anvcomp (talkcontribs) 17:18, 24 December 2009 (UTC)Reply

Information about funds collected has been updated. It was old information Anvcomp (talk) 18:38, 24 December 2009 (UTC)Reply

Overhaul edit

Brought article into line with style guidelines and deleted (some quite large) sections of POV material. Also did some wikification. Removed references tag since they have been supplied, and removed advert tag since it no longer reads like one. Handschuh-talk to me 09:58, 5 January 2010 (UTC)Reply

NB The history section has been largely removed because it was essentially a big POV soap box, and didn't really say much about the history of the organisation at all. Someone should expand it with NPOV information, but I'm not going to right now. Handschuh-talk to me 10:01, 5 January 2010 (UTC)Reply