Talk:Elmwood School (Ottawa)

Latest comment: 6 years ago by InternetArchiveBot in topic External links modified

Reads like an Ad edit

Article reads like an advertisement to attend the school. Needs to be rewritten. 74.12.180.220 (talk) 06:37, 23 June 2010 (UTC)Reply

Agreed. It still sounds like an advertisement. I've added a tag to flag this problem. Promotional wording such as "excelled", "long been recognized", "surpasses standards", "comprehensive", "most successful" have no place in an encyclopedic article (see wp:pea). Also lots of uncited claims, many of which seem to be included to boost the school's image.-- BC  talk to me 16:34, 13 May 2015 (UTC)Reply

Remove Facts and Statistics section edit

There are no sources pertaining to the "facts" mentioned in the specific section, and that has not changed for over a year. Thought I'd leave a notice that I'm thinking of deleting it in ~30 days, unless someone objects, or sources can be found. --Hicklan (talk) 02:15, 13 June 2016 (UTC)Reply

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