Talk:Elle Leonard/GA1
Latest comment: 9 months ago by RoySmith in topic GA1 Review
GA1 Review
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Reviewer: Eurohunter (talk · contribs) 17:07, 16 August 2023 (UTC)
@TonyTheTiger: I started review. Comments will be below. Review within 2023 GAN Backlog Drives. Eurohunter (talk) 17:07, 16 August 2023 (UTC)
Lead
edit- I think for this article length lead could be extended. Eurohunter (talk) 13:52, 20 August 2023 (UTC)
- Expanded.-TonyTheTiger (T / C / WP:FOUR / WP:CHICAGO / WP:WAWARD) 14:10, 3 September 2023 (UTC)
Background and early life
edit- "Leonard began playing competitive basketball in third grade at PGSL" - what is "PGSL"? Eurohunter (talk) 13:52, 20 August 2023 (UTC)
- I think I have Googled the proper subject-TonyTheTiger (T / C / WP:FOUR / WP:CHICAGO / WP:WAWARD) 14:14, 3 September 2023 (UTC)
Philanthropy
edit- "The Leonards donated $20,000 to the Armed Forces program for the American Red Cross." - is this possible to add links? Eurohunter (talk) 13:52, 20 August 2023 (UTC)
- done-TonyTheTiger (T / C / WP:FOUR / WP:CHICAGO / WP:WAWARD) 14:38, 3 September 2023 (UTC)
Other
edit- Add links to archived versions in references. Eurohunter (talk) 13:52, 20 August 2023 (UTC)
- Please clarify what you are requesting here. Do you want me to archive a group of articles?-TonyTheTiger (T / C / WP:FOUR / WP:CHICAGO / WP:WAWARD) 15:38, 5 September 2023 (UTC)
- @TonyTheTiger: Add parameters "archive-url", "archive-date" and "url-status". Eurohunter (talk) 17:39, 18 November 2023 (UTC)
- @Eurohunter @TonyTheTiger Please note that archiving references is not required by WP:GACR. It's a good thing to do, but is not a requirement. RoySmith (talk) 16:25, 19 November 2023 (UTC)
- @Eurohunter and RoySmith: is there a way now to tag an article to solicit a bot to archive all the links?-TonyTheTiger (T / C / WP:FOUR / WP:CHICAGO / WP:WAWARD) 22:54, 22 November 2023 (UTC)
- Go to https://iabot.wmcloud.org/index.php. Pick "Fix a single page" from the "Run Bot" menu at the top. That kicks off an archive run which may take a few minutes. RoySmith (talk) 23:20, 22 November 2023 (UTC)
- DONE!!! That bot even makes it look like I did hard work.-TonyTheTiger (T / C / WP:FOUR / WP:CHICAGO / WP:WAWARD) 20:18, 23 November 2023 (UTC)
- @Eurohunter and RoySmith: is there a way now to tag an article to solicit a bot to archive all the links?-TonyTheTiger (T / C / WP:FOUR / WP:CHICAGO / WP:WAWARD) 22:54, 22 November 2023 (UTC)
- @TonyTheTiger: Add parameters "archive-url", "archive-date" and "url-status". Eurohunter (talk) 17:39, 18 November 2023 (UTC)
- Please clarify what you are requesting here. Do you want me to archive a group of articles?-TonyTheTiger (T / C / WP:FOUR / WP:CHICAGO / WP:WAWARD) 15:38, 5 September 2023 (UTC)
- Reference number 2 - remove capitals. Eurohunter (talk) 13:52, 20 August 2023 (UTC)
- I got this and 3 others.-TonyTheTiger (T / C / WP:FOUR / WP:CHICAGO / WP:WAWARD) 15:35, 5 September 2023 (UTC)
- Redirects in references. Names changed over the years or are they incorrect? Eurohunter (talk) 13:52, 20 August 2023 (UTC)
- Infobox - there is number of children - wouldn't it be better to add directly whole name of son? Eurohunter (talk) 13:52, 20 August 2023 (UTC)
- I think generally only children who are WP:N are named in this situation. I think there is a privacy issue.-TonyTheTiger (T / C / WP:FOUR / WP:CHICAGO / WP:WAWARD) 15:37, 5 September 2023 (UTC)
- @TonyTheTiger: If there are reliable sources describing the names, there is no problem. Eurohunter (talk) 17:39, 18 November 2023 (UTC)
- @TonyTheTiger: So? Eurohunter (talk) 20:00, 23 November 2023 (UTC)
- The name has been in the article since March. non-notable names don't belong in the infobox.-TonyTheTiger (T / C / WP:FOUR / WP:CHICAGO / WP:WAWARD) 13:08, 24 November 2023 (UTC)
- @TonyTheTiger: So? Eurohunter (talk) 20:00, 23 November 2023 (UTC)
- @TonyTheTiger: If there are reliable sources describing the names, there is no problem. Eurohunter (talk) 17:39, 18 November 2023 (UTC)
- I think generally only children who are WP:N are named in this situation. I think there is a privacy issue.-TonyTheTiger (T / C / WP:FOUR / WP:CHICAGO / WP:WAWARD) 15:37, 5 September 2023 (UTC)
- User:Eurohunter Are you going to continue this review? It is not on hold and has not been failed.-TonyTheTiger (T / C / WP:FOUR / WP:CHICAGO / WP:WAWARD) 15:34, 30 August 2023 (UTC)
- @TonyTheTiger: Review is finished. I'm waiting for your answers. Eurohunter (talk) 19:41, 30 August 2023 (UTC)
- User:Eurohunter, there is a procedure for putting nominations on hold at WP:GAN/I#HOLD.-TonyTheTiger (T / C / WP:FOUR / WP:CHICAGO / WP:WAWARD) 21:08, 31 August 2023 (UTC)
- I will get to this in the next few days.-TonyTheTiger (T / C / WP:FOUR / WP:CHICAGO / WP:WAWARD) 02:17, 2 September 2023 (UTC)
- User:Eurohunter, there is a procedure for putting nominations on hold at WP:GAN/I#HOLD.-TonyTheTiger (T / C / WP:FOUR / WP:CHICAGO / WP:WAWARD) 21:08, 31 August 2023 (UTC)
- @TonyTheTiger: Review is finished. I'm waiting for your answers. Eurohunter (talk) 19:41, 30 August 2023 (UTC)
Can there be a discussion about the purpose of this article?
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There is a conversation to be had.SlimeSeason5 (talk) 15:39, 3 October 2023 (UTC)
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Status?
edit@TonyTheTiger and Eurohunter: this has been stalled for over two months. Is there something preventing it from moving forward?-— Preceding unsigned comment added by RoySmith (talk • contribs) 15:53, November 6, 2023 (UTC)--TonyTheTiger (T / C / WP:FOUR / WP:CHICAGO / WP:WAWARD) 06:45, 10 November 2023 (UTC)
- To my understanding there is a second opinion request at WP:GAC-TonyTheTiger (T / C / WP:FOUR / WP:CHICAGO / WP:WAWARD) 06:45, 10 November 2023 (UTC)
- I don't fully understand the history here, but I'm going to call this yet another abandoned review by Eurohunter and close it out per WP:GAN/I#N4a which will allow a new reviewer to start from scratch and get this moving again. RoySmith (talk) 17:19, 24 November 2023 (UTC)