Talk:Eldridge Recasner/GA1
Latest comment: 15 years ago by CarpetCrawler in topic GA Review
GA Review edit
Hello, I will be reviewing this article. Check back soon! CarpetCrawler (talk) 22:11, 24 September 2008 (UTC)
GA on hold edit
- In the "Amateur career" section, there are too many instances of "He/He was", it gets very repititive. In the second paragraph of that section, "He/he was" is used five times. At some points, "Recasner" may also be used.
- O.K.--TonyTheTiger (t/c/bio/WP:CHICAGO/WP:LOTM) 04:53, 25 September 2008 (UTC)
- Some external links would also be good. How about a link to his career stats? Or to his NBA.com player profile?
- O.K.--TonyTheTiger (t/c/bio/WP:CHICAGO/WP:LOTM) 03:29, 25 September 2008 (UTC)
After both things have been done, I will definitely pass this article, great job so far! I will give you seven days to meet my requirements. Thanks, and good luck! Please drop a message on my talkpage when the requirements are met. CarpetCrawler (talk) 22:53, 24 September 2008 (UTC)
- Congratulations, the article has passed! Great job by all! CarpetCrawler (talk) 16:35, 25 September 2008 (UTC)