Talk:Elaine's

Latest comment: 10 years ago by 23.243.1.164 in topic Stone Barrington article

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An editor added the {{peacock}} template to this article, a template that states "This article may contain wording that merely promotes the subject without imparting verifiable information. Please remove or replace such wording, unless you can cite independent sources that support the characterization."

The problem with the article is the unencyclopedic tone. I have replaced the template accordingly. Bongomatic 23:41, 3 December 2010 (UTC)Reply

Stone Barrington article

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The article states " Elaine's is also immortalized in the Stone Barrington novels by author Stuart Woods. The first chapter always begins with "Elaine's. Late"."

While the phrase frequently starts the novels, it does not "always." For example, Dead in the Water and Severe Clear begin differently. — Preceding unsigned comment added by 23.243.1.164 (talk) 03:26, 6 April 2014 (UTC)Reply