Talk:Edziza Formation/GA1
Latest comment: 1 month ago by Volcanoguy in topic GA Review
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Nominator: Volcanoguy (talk · contribs) 00:21, 25 March 2024 (UTC)
Reviewer: Jaguar (talk · contribs) 22:26, 5 April 2024 (UTC)
Didn't realise I haven't claimed this. I'm on mobile, please expect comments tonight or tomorrow morning. ♦ JAGUAR 22:26, 5 April 2024 (UTC)
- "comprise the central stratovolcano of Mount Edziza, as well as lava domes on the summit and flanks of the stratovolcano." - repetition, rephrase to simply comprise the central stratovolcano of Mount Edziza, as well as lava domes on its summit and flanks.
- "similar to trachyte of the Kakiddi Formation which was erupted 0.3 million years ago" - the 'was' seems redundant here
- "The lower assemblage encloses up to 120-metre-long (390-foot) and 15-metre-thick (49-foot) lavas" - geology isn't my forté, but what does lavas mean here?
- " northwesterly lobe partially encircles Tsekone Ridge and borders and overrides breccia of Pillow Ridge." - reads choppy
Well... as much as I don't like leaving short reviews, there's simply nothing else to add here. It's well written, comprehensive and simply put meets the GA criteria. As such I'm compelled to pass it, well done once again. ♦ JAGUAR 22:49, 5 April 2024 (UTC)