Talk:Ecstasy (My Bloody Valentine album)/GA1
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Reviewer: Вик Ретлхед (talk · contribs) 22:23, 11 November 2013 (UTC)
Alright, this one is next in line. Initial notes coming soon.--Вик Ретлхед (talk) 22:23, 11 November 2013 (UTC)
Before I go through the rest of the article, could you fix some issues with the punctuation: ex. "too jingly jangly." should be "too jingly jangly" or "larger than the sum of its parts." should be "larger than the sum of its parts". On the positive note, the text looks solidly written and well-composed. Definitely a strong candidate for GA.--Вик Ретлхед (talk) 22:33, 14 November 2013 (UTC)
Done Sure thing, fixed. --Idiotchalk (t@lk) 16:27, 15 November 2013 (UTC)
Went over the prose again and did some unlinking on a few words. I didn't find any major issues, so I'll pass the article. Thanks for all your work on this one.--Вик Ретлхед (talk) 16:36, 17 November 2013 (UTC)