Talk:Eastern Province, Zambia/GA1

Latest comment: 7 years ago by Ssriram mt in topic GA Review

GA Review edit

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Reviewer: Gligan (talk · contribs) 18:09, 10 January 2017 (UTC)Reply


  1. It is reasonably well written.
    a (prose, spelling, and grammar):   b (MoS for lead, layout, word choice, fiction, and lists):  
    The prose, grammar and manual of style are fine. I suggest though that you move the last two sentences of the section Administration to section Demographics.
  Done
  1. It is factually accurate and verifiable.
    a (reference section):   b (citations to reliable sources):   c (OR):   d (copyvio and plagiarism):  
    The article is well referenced; the sources seem reliable; there is no original research or plagiarism. However, there seems to a factual mistake in the Demographics section: The total area of the province was 51,476 km2 and the population density was 30.90 per km2. The population density during 2000 Zambian census stood at 30.90. The last figure cannot be 30.90. You should check the source and correct it.
  Done.
  1. It is broad in its coverage.
    a (major aspects):   b (focused):  
    The coverage of the article seems broad enough.
  2. It follows the neutral point of view policy.
    Fair representation without bias:  
    Fine.
  3. It is stable.
    No edit wars, etc.:  
    Fine.
  4. It is illustrated by images and other media, where possible and appropriate.
    a (images are tagged and non-free content have fair use rationales):   b (appropriate use with suitable captions):  
    The images are with appropriate licenses and illustrate the article well.
  5. Overall:
    Pass/Fail:  
    I am putting the article on hold until the few issues raised are addressed. --Gligan (talk) 18:26, 10 January 2017 (UTC)Reply
User:Gligan - Thanks a lot for taking up the review. I have incorporated the comments - please check at your convenience.Ssriram mt (talk) 12:05, 11 January 2017 (UTC)Reply
User:Ssriram mt: Thank you for addressing the issues. You have done great job with the article. Regards, --Gligan (talk) 19:40, 11 January 2017 (UTC)Reply
User:Gligan - Thanks a lot - this is good motivation to promote similar articles.Ssriram mt (talk) 01:25, 12 January 2017 (UTC)Reply