Talk:Earthling (Fringe)/GA1

Latest comment: 12 years ago by Queenieacoustic in topic GA Review

GA Review

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Reviewer: Queenieacoustic (talk) 12:52, 23 June 2011 (UTC)Reply

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Plot

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  1. "Agent Broyles (Lance Reddick) explains the case is similar to one he had trouble on in the past," Change "on" to "with".

Production

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Writing and filming
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  1. "Worth, Orloff, and the rest of visual effects team earned a nomination for their work on "Earthling"." This should be in the Reception section.
  2. "In addition to its original score, "Earthling" featured musical content from outside artists. These songs included "Freezing" by American singer MoZella, "Straighten Up and Fly Right" by American musician Nat King Cole, and "Una Fertima Lagrima" by American tenor Mario Lanza." This information doesn't fit in a subsection called "Writing and filming". You could include it in the second subsection, "Casting", and rename it to "Audio and casting", or something similar.
Casting
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  1. "Guest actor Gerard Plunkett made his first of two appearances in "Earthling" as James Van Horn (the second would be a season three episode)." "first of two appearances in "Earthling" makes it seem as if Plunkett made two appearances in the episode. Sentence needs to be rewritten.

Reception

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Ratings
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Nothing here.

Reviews
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  1. "A.V. Club" should be "The A.V. Club".

Lead

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Nothing here.

In conclusion

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An excellent article, and the Production section was very interesting to read! Fix the earlier mentioned problems and I'll gladly pass it for GA. On hold. Queenieacoustic (talk) 12:52, 23 June 2011 (UTC)Reply

All fixed. Thank you very much for the review! Ruby2010 comment! 16:59, 23 June 2011 (UTC)Reply
Passed. Queenieacoustic (talk) 17:03, 23 June 2011 (UTC)Reply