Talk:Early life of Marcus Aurelius/GA1

GA Review

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Reviewer: Iazyges (talk · contribs) 07:41, 22 July 2018 (UTC)

Will start soon. Iazyges Consermonor Opus meum 07:41, 22 July 2018 (UTC)

Criteria

GA Criteria
GA Criteria: 1 1.a Y 1.b Y 2 2.a Y 2.b Y 2.c Y 2.d Y 3 3.a Y 3.b Y 4 4.a Y 5 5.a Y 6 6.a Y 6.b Y

• No DAB links Y
• No dead links Y
• No missing citations Y

Prose Suggestions

Please note that all of these are suggestions, and can be implemented or ignored at your discretion.

• Suggest expanding the lead paragraphs, perhaps add in info about his wife and children, and about his civic roles. Iazyges Consermonor Opus meum 19:28, 22 July 2018 (UTC)
• He served as a Roman consul prior to his accession. suggest:

  He served as a Roman consul three times prior to his accession.

• he probably taught Marcus the basics of that language.[35] (He is said to have taught Marcus literature.[36]) suggest:

  he probably taught Marcus the basics of that language, as he is said to have taught Marcus literature.

• For his dutiful behavior, Antoninus was asked to accept the name "Pius" should specify who asked him to. Iazyges Consermonor Opus meum 19:28, 22 July 2018 (UTC)
• Edward Champlin reckons him a senator. suggest:

  Edward Champlin suggests he may have been a senator.

• @Векочел: That is all my suggestions, passing now. Iazyges Consermonor Opus meum 19:28, 22 July 2018 (UTC)