Talk:ESRB re-rating of The Elder Scrolls IV: Oblivion/Archive 1
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Successful good article nomination
I am glad to say that this article which was nominated for good article status has succeeded. This is how the article, as of July 11, 2007, compares against the six good article criteria:
- 1. Well written?: Lead should be separated into multiple paragraphs.
- 2. Factually accurate?:
- 3. Broad in coverage?: Other then topless characters, discuss any other reasons for the change
- 4. Neutral point of view?:
- 5. Article stability?
- 6. Images?: None. Maybe an Elder Scrolls image?
If you feel that this review is in error, feel free to take it to a GA review. Thank you to all of the editors who worked hard to bring it to this status. — Giggy UCP 04:54, 11 July 2007 (UTC)
- Thanks, Giggy. I'll be right on that. Geuiwogbil 05:50, 11 July 2007 (UTC)
- How's that? Better? Geuiwogbil 07:33, 11 July 2007 (UTC)
Innacurate descriptions
I noticed that in this article, Snow is referred to simply as a "drug smuggling game" and Bully is reffered to as a "schoolyard bullying game". Although I can't say whether or not Snow is strictly all about drug smuggling (I have heard the main theme of the game is cocain), Bully is not actually a "bullying game". That's like calling GTA a "hooker-killing game" or Dead Rising a "mass murdering game". 63.3.0.129 19:13, 22 July 2007 (UTC)
- Many apologies, Anon. Can you suggest a better gloss? Perhaps "Bully, a third person action-adventure video game"? For Snow, a canceled game without any substantial press coverage, I have relied on the article from which the information is drawn from: CNN Money's "'Grand Theft Auto' publisher plays it safe". The article characterizes Snow as "a real-time strategy game that let you advance from a marijuana smuggler to drug kingpin, managing an international smuggling operation", and Bully as "a game that tells the story of a troublesome schoolboy who stands up to bullies and teachers and pulls pranks around campus". I was being careless. I'll move to correct it. Thanks for the quick eye, Anon. ^_^ Geuiwogbil 22:16, 27 July 2007 (UTC)
- I've given them new glosses. Geuiwogbil 20:16, 28 July 2007 (UTC)