Talk:EGM: prevention of violence against women and girls
Latest comment: 9 years ago by 123chess456 in topic Too long
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Too long edit
I think this article is too long - it doesn't need to cover every recommendation - much better would be secondary and tertiary source insights into the impact of this meeting/ set of recommendations. I'm also concerned there might be close paraphrasing of UN copyright materials but I haven't checked this in detail.--Obi-Wan Kenobi (talk) 02:29, 26 April 2014 (UTC)
- @Obiwankenobi: Good idea, if you could fix the areas you believe are wrong I wholeheartedly endorse this proposal. Grognard 123chess456 (talk) 22:09, 2 August 2014 (UTC)